Some people believe that it is better for childern to grow up in the countryside; some others think children will have more oppoturnities in their life if they live in a big city. In my opinion, living in the city is better for children.
First, in the city schools are better than in the countryside. Special instructions, modern methods of teaching, etc…have children in the city better than those in the countryside. In the city, there are modern classes, laboratories for students, etc…so that students can practise what they have learnt from school. Because of their knowledge and experience, they will have more oppoturnities and success in their affairs.
Second, there are many good services such as medical, dental, etc…so it is more convenient to take care of children when they are sick or hurt. In the countryside it takes you hours to get to the nearest medical center. Not only medical service, the city also have more service which the countryside doesn’t have such as entertainment, business, etc… So, city life is better.
Third, children who live in the city have more chances to choose what they want to be. They can choose to be a dancer, an artist, a doctor, etc… In the city, there are many big companies, firms for them to choose with well-pay job depends on their pualifications. They will be prepared for their life by what they’ve learnt at schools and will have more oppoturnities to make a good career and get successful. So there is no difficulty for them in serving their life.
In conclusion, life in the city brings more benefits to children’s life and as a child, I want to be raised in the city. The job oppoturnities, medical services, good schools, etc… are good conditions. It is comfortable for children to do what they want and be the best at it.
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