Tiếng Anh [Ielts Writing] Dress code - Outline

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    Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    Topic:

    Some people believe that it is no need for the manager to care about their worker's clothes because the most important things are their work quality.

    I think that it depends on the type of job.

    Body 1:

    Topic: On the one hand, there are so many companies that do not require their workers to have a dress code anymore.

    Main 1: Not all jobs need employees to wear a uniform or formal clothes

    Sp 1: For example: Designer -> work with computers -> dont need to dress up beautiful -> casual clothes -> more comfortable -> high quality job

    Main 2: Apple and Facebook are two incredible companies, and both are not requiring their employees to wear a uniform.

    Sp 2: The purpose is to create an amazing work environment, a fun, creative place to enhance the quality of their staff's work.

    Body 2

    Topic: On the other hand, there are some occupations that workers must wear in a formal way.

    Impression on the guests.

    Conclusion: In conclusion, although I believe that the way a person dresses cannot affect his quality of work, in some specific jobs, employees should have a dress code to get the best of their jobs
     
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